请帮忙看下我的CV, 这样写可以吗??Dear Sir or Madam:
Your advertisement for sales designer in august 30 THE TIME interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.
I am fresh grad from NAFA; the course is Fashion Merchandising & marketing, basically I can do the designs are able to fit the marketing needs. And more information will in my resume.
I will appreciate the privilege of an interview. And if you need call me: 90782913
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Have a nice day
Daincy, He Ying
here are my comments....
Dear Sir or Madam:
This is Daincy He Ying. I would like to apply for the position of sales engineer you advertised on THE TIME dated 30 August 2008.
I am a fresh graduate from Nanyang Academy of Fine Arts (“NAFA”), majored in Fashion Merchandising & Marketing. I am competent in designing products that suit marketing needs. [More information, such as your final year project or practical design, to illustrate the competency.]
I have had several internship experiences in the relevant industry during my course in NAFA. [more information on the internships, if any]
I would appreciate if I may be granted an interview opportunity. Please do not hesitate to contact me at [phone and email address].
Thank you and warm regards,
Daincy, He Ying
6 Sep 2008
This is Daincy He Ying. I would like to apply for the position of sales engineer you advertised on THE TIME dated 30 August 2008.
I am a fresh graduate from Nanyang Academy of Fine Arts (“NAFA”), majored in Fashion Merchandising & Marketing. I am competent in designing products that suit marketing needs. [More information, such as your final year project or practical design, to illustrate the competency.]
I have had several internship experiences in the relevant industry during my course in NAFA. [more information on the internships, if any]
I would appreciate if I may be granted an interview opportunity. Please do not hesitate to contact me at [phone and email address].
Thank you and warm regards,
Daincy, He Ying
6 Sep 2008
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