2008年第十五届亚洲象棋锦标赛(新加坡举办)总贴
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作者:几度 (等级:12 - 登峰造极,发帖:3128) 发表:2008-09-02 21:34:08  22楼  评分: 
add onsi think for the following sentence, its better to add a few more words after 4 best players to make the sentence more complete, . best 4 in national open doesnt mean best 4 in Singapore as not all players have participated.. hmm... (more...)
Unnecessary
When piggy888 wrote the post, we could all understand he's talking about this year score not trying to underestimate all players in Singapore. Therefore I think the add-ons are quite unnecessary. Otherwise if people continue and continue to add on, the sentence eventually becomes something like this and even worse:

<Based on this year's national open result, they are the 4 best players [out of all those participants {who had time to and dare play group A this year and who had no direct evidence in this competition showing them stronger than any playerer from group B or Ladies and who had drunk too much mineral water during this competition and wasted precious time to go toilet and...}] we have for this year>.

I guess you didn't play the tournament this year and missed a lot of fun. :P


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