请帮忙看下我的CV, 这样写可以吗??Dear Sir or Madam: Your advertisement for sales designer in august 30 THE TIME interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking. I am fresh grad from NAFA; the course is Fashion Merchandising & marketing, basically I can do the designs are able to fit the marketing needs. And more information will in my resume. I will appreciate the privilege of an interview. And if you need call me: 90782913 Thank you for your time and consideration. Have a nice day Daincy, He Ying

我抛砖引玉一下，哎，2秘是要支持的，虽然最近1秘不见了。。。Dear Sir or Madam， This is Daincy from Nanyang Academy Fine Arts Institute (NAFA). I read your advertisement for sales designer in The Times on August 30th. I would like to apply for this position. I believe it is not only a job I am competent enough to fit and contribute to the company, but also a career opportunity that I would like to try as my very first step entering the industry. I graduated from NAFA this year with major in Fashion Merchandising and marketing. Please find attached my CV for more information about my expertise and related experience. Thank you very much, and look forward to hearing from you soon. Wish you a pleasant day ahead! Daincy, He Ying