请帮忙看下我的CV, 这样写可以吗??Dear Sir or Madam: Your advertisement for sales designer in august 30 THE TIME interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking. I am fresh grad from NAFA; the course is Fashion Merchandising & marketing, basically I can do the designs are able to fit the marketing needs. And more information will in my resume. I will appreciate the privilege of an interview. And if you need call me: 90782913 Thank you for your time and consideration. Have a nice day Daincy, He Ying

请帮忙看下我的CV, 这样写可以吗??Dear Sir or Madam: Your advertisement for sales designer in august 30 THE TIME interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking. I am fresh grad from NAFA; the course is Fashion Merchandising & marketing, basically I can do the designs are able to fit the marketing needs. And more information will in my resume. I will appreciate the privilege of an interview. And if you need call me: 90782913 Thank you for your time and consideration. Have a nice day Daincy, He Ying

貌似改了下真的很不一样什么时候帮俺的也改改。。。偶的cover letter用了4年了， 该换换了。

两次做完全不同的东西么？请parrot 美女分享

授之以鱼不若授之以渔Parrot老妹很好心，不过最好还是让楼主自己去修改吧。

拜托阿，在这里分享好不好啊

here are my comments....Dear Sir or Madam: This is Daincy He Ying. I would like to apply for the position of sales engineer you advertised on THE TIME dated 30 August 2008. I am a fresh graduate from Nanyang Academy of Fine Arts (“NAFA”), majored in Fashion Merchandising & Marketing. I am competent in designing products that suit marketing needs. [More information, such as your final year project or practical design, to illustrate the competency.] I have had several internship experiences in the relevant industry during my course in NAFA. [more information on the internships, if any] I would appreciate if I may be granted an interview opportunity. Please do not hesitate to contact me at [phone and email address]. Thank you and warm regards, Daincy, He Ying 6 Sep 2008