here are my comments....Dear Sir or Madam: This is Daincy He Ying. I would like to apply for the position of sales engineer you advertised on THE TIME dated 30 August 2008. I am a fresh graduate from Nanyang Academy of Fine Arts (“NAFA”), majored in Fashion Merchandising & Marketing. I am competent in designing products that suit marketing needs. [More information, such as your final year project or practical design, to illustrate the competency.] I have had several internship experiences in the relevant industry during my course in NAFA. [more information on the internships, if any] I would appreciate if I may be granted an interview opportunity. Please do not hesitate to contact me at [phone and email address]. Thank you and warm regards, Daincy, He Ying 6 Sep 2008