请教英语翻译问题国内同学的女朋友学会计的，让我给她翻译一段话。
试了一下，觉得很多地方特勉强， 大家帮偶看看哈。
该扔鸡蛋的地方多扔几个石头，
该扔石头的地方多扔几个鸡蛋。
中文-------
公司理财方法研究
--论公司理财目标的确定及策略的选择
摘要
随着我国改革开放的进一步深入，国际贸易在我国国民生产中所占比例是越来越大。
我国无论是外资公司或是国营公司的经济管理已经开始逐步按照国际化标准运行。
为此，公司财务会计对各个环节的控制必须建立一套完整的监督手段和行之有效的管理体系，使之与公司管理的总目标相适应，
同时使财务会计组织形成一种自我约束、自我督促、自我完善的机制。
本文从分析公司理财的基本含义及其主要内容，
重点针对公司理财的目标及公司理财的重点策略进行确定和选择，以保证公司的持续发展和利益最大化。
关键词：公司理财，目标，策略
以下是我翻译的---------------
Research of financing policy in a company
--financing in a company: how to determine the aim and how to choose the correct strategy
Summary
Along with the further development of economic innovation,
larger and larger proportion of our country's Gross National Product comes from international trade.
In our country, every company, no matter it is foreign capital or it is state capital,
is starting to operate on an international standard step by step.
Thus, the financial accountant of a company has to build a complete set of rules for supervision
and set up an efficient system for administration which can be adjust to control different departments of the company,
so as to correspond with the the ultimate objective of the company administration
and to make the organization of financial accountant to be self-restricting, self-supervising and self-improving.
Through an analysis of the basic meaning and the main content of financing in a company,
this article focuses on how to determine the aim and how to choose the correct strategy of financing in a company
so as to ensure the company persistent development and maximum benefit.
Key words: financing in a company, aim, strategy
[我行故我 (5-5 1:49, Long long ago)]
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随便说两句哈。。偶是外行公司理财译为financial management in a company似乎好点。financing in a company好像怪怪的
“无论”什么什么那句： “In our country, every company, be it foreign capital or state capital, is starting to operate on an international standard step by step.” 可能好点
"no matter" 好像不应该加从句的
[chaton (5-5 15:16, Long long ago)]
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论文式的用语总该稍微文气一点吧..比如summary改说abstract..
比如financing in a company改说corpration finance management..
再把乱七八糟不必要的the清掉..[疯狐狸 (5-6 13:38, Long long ago)]
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i know that Zhai Yao is "Abstract". but wind-fox has already pointed it out ..[materialist (5-8 11:51, Long long ago)] [ 传统版 | sForum ][登录后回复]4楼
(引用 materialist:i know that Zhai Yao is "Abstract". but wind-fox has already pointed it out ..):P早上看到你了
急急忙忙的样子[我行故我 (5-9 22:52, Long long ago)]
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个人粗略译为如下..有错请指正.公司理财方法研究 The research of Approaches to Corporate Finance
--论公司理财目标的确定及策略的选择----
the determination of corporate fiancial target and choice of corresponding strategy
摘要Abstract
随着我国改革开放的进一步深入，国际贸易在我国国民生产中所占比例是越来越大。
As China's open policy deepens ,the proporation of international trade in Gross national income has become
increasingly bigger
我国无论是外资公司或是国营公司的经济管理已经开始逐步按照国际化标准运行。
In China, both foregin-invested and state-owned corporations have already begun to operate in International
standards
为此，公司财务会计对各个环节的控制必须建立一套完整的监督手段和行之有效的管理体系，使之与公司管理的总目标相适应，
同时使财务会计组织形成一种自我约束、自我督促、自我完善的机制。
Hereby,to meet the the general management objectives of corportaions , accountants should establish a whole set of supervision skills and effective management system Meanwhile. make the organzation of
accountants form a system of self-restricting, self-monitoring and self-improving.
本文从分析公司理财的基本含义及其主要内容，
重点针对公司理财的目标及公司理财的重点策略进行确定和选择，以保证公司的持续发展和利益最大化。
This article analyses the basic meaning and main content of corporate finance and highlights on the objectives of corporate finance to determine and choose primary strategies ??(这句原文我看的头大,按照自己理解,留疑)and to ensure the continual development and max-profit of corporations.
关键词：公司理财，目标，策略
key words :corporate finance , objective, strategy
对经济方面是门外.粗略译了一下.还请其他多多指正错误.互相切磋.
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