请看朋友的CV，帮忙 找问题， 谢谢（IT software engineer)
各位华新的兄弟姐妹，请帮忙看看这个CV。
CV是我朋友的，让他准备了一周多，结果拿这个来应付我。
本来想好好给他改下子，可是一想结果人家还不认可，以前就有这样子（他认为女人的意见不可取）
所以发到网上，请各位帮忙给评出错误之处。谢谢。
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OBJECTIVE I specialize in the development of Java/C# based client/server, web applications and am well versed in several other areas. I am interested in Senior Engineer/Architect and Technology Director roles on projects.
Availability and Rates I will available on
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EXPERIENCE
Information Systems, Shenzhen, Guangdong, P.R.C
Software Engineer & Senior Database Administrator December 2003 – Present
 Design software system architecture
 Design schemas, logic and physical structure of databases, deploy distributed databases.
 Design soft (more...)
To little information on working exp
Put in "what did you achieve" rather than "what did you do"
Example of "what did you achieve":
Project Manager for ABC project (Traffic Management project for LTA, 3 million+)
Responsible for project budgeting and recruiting
Coordination between customers, engineerings, and subcontractors
......
Solution Architect for XYZ project (e-Government project for Shenzhen, 3 million+)
Responsible for detailed technical design of the project
Leading the staging and pilot depolyment of the project
.....
Exmaple of "what did you do":
Project Manger
Budgeting
Recruiting
Corrdinating
......
Solution Architect
Designing
Programing
Staging
......
Example of "what did you achieve":
Project Manager for ABC project (Traffic Management project for LTA, 3 million+)
Responsible for project budgeting and recruiting
Coordination between customers, engineerings, and subcontractors
......
Solution Architect for XYZ project (e-Government project for Shenzhen, 3 million+)
Responsible for detailed technical design of the project
Leading the staging and pilot depolyment of the project
.....
Exmaple of "what did you do":
Project Manger
Budgeting
Recruiting
Corrdinating
......
Solution Architect
Designing
Programing
Staging
......
Yeah!
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